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j4 ([personal profile] j4) wrote2008-05-14 10:43 pm

Magnetism

There is a small gap,
tangible, between like poles,
a pocket of air

held like a held breath.
The pressure of a hand can
force that gap to yield

a little, to gasp
a little, to resist just
a little, to flex

like a muscle. Brace,
brace. (Adopt the position.)
The blood flows in and

out, a little. What
happens if those poles are forced
together is left

as an exercise
for the reader who has a
heartbeat, muscles,

and a fistful of iron.
ext_8707: Taken in front of Carnegie Hall (cigar)

[identity profile] ronebofh.livejournal.com 2008-05-14 10:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Marvelous.

[identity profile] juggzy.livejournal.com 2008-05-14 11:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely.

I remember when it was this immediate.

[identity profile] keirf.livejournal.com 2008-05-15 11:52 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I enjoyed reading this several times.

[identity profile] vinaigrettegirl.livejournal.com 2008-05-15 11:59 am (UTC)(link)
that's exquisite writing. Thank you for putting it up for us to read.