Magnetism

May. 14th, 2008 10:43 pm
j4: (kanji)
[personal profile] j4
There is a small gap,
tangible, between like poles,
a pocket of air

held like a held breath.
The pressure of a hand can
force that gap to yield

a little, to gasp
a little, to resist just
a little, to flex

like a muscle. Brace,
brace. (Adopt the position.)
The blood flows in and

out, a little. What
happens if those poles are forced
together is left

as an exercise
for the reader who has a
heartbeat, muscles,

and a fistful of iron.

Date: 2008-05-14 10:21 pm (UTC)
ext_8707: Taken in front of Carnegie Hall (cigar)
From: [identity profile] ronebofh.livejournal.com
Marvelous.

Date: 2008-05-14 11:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] juggzy.livejournal.com
Lovely.

I remember when it was this immediate.

Date: 2008-05-15 11:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keirf.livejournal.com
Thank you. I enjoyed reading this several times.

Date: 2008-05-15 11:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vinaigrettegirl.livejournal.com
that's exquisite writing. Thank you for putting it up for us to read.

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